All Comments on 'Emily's Vacation'

I wish my last vacation was this good

Why is it that some assholes can only get off if a woman is being humiliated?

Now we have the hero, the heroine and the bad guy. This could lead to a very interesting two weeks. Whatever you do keep going!

I'm sorry if you were offended. I think a story is more interesting as a narrative arc if the main character goes through hell before a happy ending comes, whether in erotica or a literary novel. Obviously this is nowhere close to the literary realm, so I still needed to try to write "going through hell" in a way that some people might find arousing. I'm sorry that it didn't hit the mark for you.

Definitely keep writing! Maybe add more transition and then definitely a follow up where Emily gets to the clothing optional beach, with or without her new friend. She sounds like she could be an excellent character with many more future stories.

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Awesome story. Expecting to see more of your work!