All Comments on 'Emma'

I loved the chemistry between these two! I appreciated that you took the time to really develop a strong relationship and connection between them. I like how everything worked out for them.

My only concern was the stillborn. Usually that means that the baby is carried to term and then born as a stillborn. Wouldn't Neil have known that she was pregnant if she'd been working there for years and only dated Blake for 1 year? Or did you mean that she had a miscarriage early on before she was showing?

Either way that seemed to be the only thing that confused me.

Great story :)

He met her in 2008, and knew her for 3 years prior to getting together with her, so how could their daughter be 8 years old in 2018?

2008 + 3 = 2011

2011 + at least 9 months = 2012

2018 - 2012 = 6 years old is the oldest the child could be.