All Comments on 'Emma Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Bad title!

It should've been called "Piggy" since it wasn't really about Emma. Plus, you need an editor for your grammar and spelling errors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
well...

the title and the description made me want to read it, but it wasn't about that at all. I assume it's just a build up to Emma growing up to be a fat single mother herself who whores herself out for money, but do we really need to know about her mother? Also, it's not really non-consent. It was an okay read but I felt cheated. Hope it gets better soon.

tongueman53tongueman536 months ago

Reminds me of a Trailer Park BBW that I fucked for over 7 years !

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