All Comments on 'Emma's Uncle'

So hot! Love your writing style. Can’t wait for the next story.

terrible writing

This doesn’t makes sense. Did her dad know about the Uncle’s plans? How is the Uncle supposed to keep that a secret from her family? He can’t just kidnap her and breed her without her family getting involved or finding out. She is on her way to college ffs! Scenario doesn’t make any sense, unless family knows and is culpable.

Well written

I hope to read more chapters!

You did a good job!! Love to see more

I can't wait

I want to read how she is fucked on her most fertile day and impregnated.

YE, WTF? The father's approval? Yeahhhhhhhh how? God eek

Well written, but rough and painful are not sexy to me.

Good story. A follow-up would be great

NightOwl47 wrote

<<<Too rough

Well written, but rough and painful are not sexy to me.

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Well, I say: then, go somewhere else.

It's a good start.

But why the hell he needed her father's approval?

Are you planning to have incest on this story? If not, it's only a disposable information.

Please please write more. It’s well written story.

Great

Very very hot. I need more.

Good pacing and intensity.

I need this so badly, I dont care how it happens.

Well, we need more chapters please as Emma is used and abused by her uncle. Will he be the only guy to use her or will there be some of his buddies around from time to time? Will she get pregnant or will she survive long enough to go to school? One could assume that she will be naked in the house. Will she eat from a bowl on the floor or will he spoon feed her himself? Overall I do hope that she does leave her abuse and maybe he dies inside of his burning house as she walks away. So many options to go with this journey of humiliation, degradation, and dark story. PLease continue the story with your usual creative (and fertile) imagination.

I gotta know what deal dad n uncle made? Lots of space to explore my kinda kink...

It's interesting that no one is calling him a rapist... which he plainly is. The female character thoughts were, he made me cum twice and oh well I like children... now that's disturbing.

I wonder why the father made a deal with his brother. Poor Emma, I wonder what else her uncle has planned

This isn’t non consent. This is just rape. Grosss and super weird

I can't believe them I swear if this might be real I'll punch that little shit of an uncle she has

I don't understand the complaints that this is rape. Yes. What do you think non-consent means? Why read non-consent stories if non-consent offends you?

For the people getting pissed at this, why are you getting pissed? And for the person who commented non-consent is not rape please go back to school. Haha cos I don't understand how you think rape and non-consent are different things. Plus for every complaint why read non-consent when it's not your genre please research before you dive into something and not come here to be giving uneducated comments. As for the story I love it.

Looking forward of taming her

Of course, it's not real. Of course, it's rape. That's what this entire section is. If this was real she'd be crying completely. Also and this is the biggest easiest way to know this isn't real THAT'S NOT HOW THE HYMEN WORKS.

I dislike women being treated with violence. They are only "yours" when they make the choice themselves ... and that's the only way the man deserves to feel any satisfaction ... until then its just violence

YES !!

It's great . Not violence outside of the genetalia. Most people, I think, regard rape as violent in terms of beatings , whippings, etc. Perhaps the difference is forced sex vs forced sex including additional body brutality to those believing nonconsent is just usual recreational sex. I dunno, just guessing.

It was great until you blew it with the placement of the hymen. It is a thin membrane on the outside of the vaginal channel. You can break the hymen with sports, a tampon, or fingers,

The hymen is NOT on the outside of the vaginal channel. It's inside! Jeez, and you're a female?!

Anonymous the Hymen is NOT inside the vagina. As WitchyUrsula said it's at the opening. The only internal "barrier" is the cervix which is definitely not getting penetrated. While we're on the subject, unless there is something medically wrong with you, the hymen is not a barrier - it needs to have at least one large hole in it to let menstrual blood out, if it doesn't you'd have to go to the gynaecologist for surgical intervention. It naturally stretches with age and activity - sports, climbing trees, tampons, masturbation - so for the vast majority of women, bleeding is not a sing of 'purity', but a sign their partner is both inconsiderate and bad at sex. Maybe before deciding that you know better than women how their bodies work based on reading fictional stories written by other equally clueless men, do some research. If reading isn't your thing, I know there's at least one video about this on the sexplanations YouTube channel by Dr Doe. The more you know the better the sex will be

Stupid and ugly. Pretty Twisted mind behind this I guess. You need to get help.

I want more please write more about Emma

Please write more, loved your story

To those saying the hymen is on the outside, no it is not it is a thin permeable membrane located just inside the vaginal canal and actually for younger women bleeding is common due to the presence of small blood vessels along the outer edge of the hymen which are often ruptured when the membrane is broken

To the idiot who is either male or has a defect, the hymen... the hymen is about an inch or inside the opening.. with some women it can be further back,, it does not have a hole in it, it is a barrier until its torn from your body, yes it can be broken other ways, but usually it's dick.

hymens are not all alike, and most DO have a hole in them, of varying sizes. Don't believe it, look it up, but let's not have some incel's making up bullshit about women when they've never even been with one before.

Hymens have a hole in them so that a girl/woman can menstruate. Very rarely a baby is born with an imperforate hymen, and this is usually found when a girl isn't starting their period and goes to a doctor for a peek. Most women rupture their hymen as girls doing things like horseback riding, riding bikes, gymnastics etc. It's not an impenetrable barrier, some girls have barely any hymen at all.

What kind of uncle would do something like that to his niece?

Where is his conscience?

Holy shit!!! This turned me on way more than I’d like to admit

This comment section is a friggin train wreck lol. Good story though.

Very good part 02 please