All Comments on 'End of Innocence Ch. 16'

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PrinceLukePrinceLukeover 4 years ago
Wow

This is another stunning chapter in their story. I gave you a 5 star ratig as usual. I wish thou that maybe somehow you could have written it so that some of her eggs were salvaged now and could be either frozen or fertilized now. The fact they can never bare life now is deeply saddedning to me.

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Just a little note, the story that I am creating, The End of Innocence, has 18 chapters. I started working on it under another name, Sacred Love. The original draft was completed several years ago but did not totally comply to Literotica's standards. The rewrite fixed all t...

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