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Click hereThe only holdout was Lincoln. He was successful in his field, although it was as a criminal. He was the one who had taken care of Fast Eddie the last time. He wanted to feed him to the fishes in the river, but Nathan told him no.
This was the end for that dick head this time. Lincoln would have his way this time.
Soon Fast Eddie would be sleeping with the catfish in the Savannah River.
Lincoln was delighted to her from his little brother Kirby. He was also delighted to hear about Fast Eddie.
Not only because he could do the man who had helped his family when they really needed it a favor, and not because he had not known about his trouble with Heidi till the problem had been solved.
Fucking Fast Eddie Burkholder had become a constant pain in his ass, like a huge fucking hemorrhoid.
The stupid white boy did not know how to do business. Big Bubba had very few problems with law enforcement. He knew if they got a chance they would gladly bust his ass. Bubba kept a low profile and if his people screwed up he took care of it quietly.
Dumb Eddie on the other hand was all flash and show, shootouts with other gangs with innocent bystanders being killed. His hookers were junkies, mostly HIV positive and they rolled most of their johns.
This caused a public outcry and stirred up a media frenzy, which stirred up the cops. They cracked down on everyone, not just Eddie's bunch. It was very bad for business.
Lincoln decided that he needed to think of a very creative way to take care of Fast Eddie, one that would send a message to all the small fry operators to mind their manners or else. Then business could go back to the usual ebb and flow.
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Anonymousover 4 years agoStretch yourself and look at the writers home page.
https://www.literotica.com/s/end-of-the-innocence-the-sea-cruise
Anonymousover 5 years agoSeems like about a page of the story is missing. Maybe it just got dropped in the upload. Or, if that’s really all there is, it’s gotta be one of the worst endings ever.
Tim413413almost 9 years agoreaders rated these two parts so highly. I couldn't believe this was the end so I went to the author's story list and found the third part - "EotI: Sea Cruise." Kirby knows everyone! And the author certainly knows how to jump the shark. I'm going to skip the last chap.
Anonymousover 9 years agoYour style is what I consider over the top fantasy. If your hero needs something, he knows someone who is always the top man in the area to get the job done. If not, then his best friend is a multi talented rich as hell mean SOB who just happens to conveniately own the needed facility. Granted, this does reduce the time spent Developing characters and plot conflicts, but it radically reduces believability of an otherwise good story. It would help if you would've introduced Lincoln at the same time as his brother, and waited to use him until needed, or just had him be involved in the criminal world in the "middle manager" range, and used him to get his boss to put a hit on Fast Eddie. Our hero certainly has the cash to do that. Or maybe just have him pay off Da's debt. I enjoy reading your stories, but please keep them more grounded. Suddenly having a "lifelong best friend that owes him" for every need is just not the way to go. Keep on writing...we all get better if we keep on trying. :-)
