All Comments on 'Endless Time'

All's fair in love and ....!

5

Great loving and playful story, 5!

"I came in fire, wind and waves of ecstasy..." - a decidedly shiver-worthy description. A day of sexual frustration, condensed to less than 750 words, yet with palpable intensity. Beautiful!

That little vixen even worked the night shift. He should be planning to up the ante with some nefarious gadgets for her upcoming weekend.

Perhaps another chapter, 750 work max optional, on her turn?

edging, denial, chastity... all created by women to get stuff done around the house.

That's right, the women are smarter. Smarter than a man in every way.

-Robert Palmer

Lovely premise.

But barely a beginning, no less a complete story.

And the sex is nice, but lacks details. Step-by-step details. Needs dialog during sex about the sex.

Four stars.

Does the concept of 750 words have you confused, Anonymous?

Deliciously frustrating torture, masochism anyone ?