by stevenamandson
This is good SO FAR, but you kind of left of stranded!!🤪
You SHOULD’VE not left ANY until you’ve AT LEAST gotten to ONE good part!!😍
PLEASE, in the future, have AT LEAST - ONE GOOD time/ea chapter, even if you must make longer chapters. If you can’t do that, than please save the chapters until you’ve included at least ONE good point, THEN submit them!!
You’re have a FANTASTIC START, PLEASE continue!!😀
I think this is going to be very, very erótic and funny. Anxius waiting for more chapters. Don't delay, please.
It’s a bit if a reach for a boyfriend to be able to send his gf for “correction”. Is this an alt universe situation? Teaching them their “true place” yikes is this comedy or horror?
Tess (uk)