All Comments on 'Enemies with Benefits'

Hi, this is the first story I've ever written, and I'd really welcome any feedback, on here or by private message. I'd like to write more, so would love to hear what works and what doesn't. It's always hard to guess what's your own kink and what others will find sexy.

Thanks for reading it!

Your kind comment is really appreciated. Didn't know if the second person would get annoying. Aimed at women and maybe not the best for straight male readers. ;)

Weird about the trolls. An odd thing to spend time doing.

Well, I should amend one thing: I should have said if you get a low vote, it doesn't AUTOMATICALLY mean someone hated it. I'm sure some of my 1s and 2s (thankfully, I haven't gotten many) were genuine, honest votes. Believe you me, I've repeated over and over to myself many times, "It could just be a troll, it could just be a troll..." I don't get why anyone would waste time doing that either; just psychos, I guess.

But yeah, indeed, never know who might find what appealing, to each their own, so posting these stories is sort of a gamble. Usually, though, people are natch going to feel inclined to read their favorite genres...so, not a HUGE gamble. Just thoughts. ;)

Genuinely one of the hottest stories I've ever read on here (and I've read a lot!). Excellent writing style too, please write more in the same vein (maybe a sequel?), I didn't want it to end.

Thanks so much, plm123. I can't tell you how encouraging it is to hear you enjoyed it. The more so since it seems to be dividing opinion. I've had some very bad ratings from some.

I probably won't do a sequel with the same heroine, but I'll write another story soon probably.

Really well written. Whilst not quite my cup of tea, still deeply erotic and well paced. Look forward to your next story!