by Pugzilla
Thank you for leaving feedback. It's always appreciated. It's especially nice to get compliments. Length is always an issue. I am more of a novel writer. If I didn't edit myself This would be a badly structured and fatally flawed book with minimal erotic content. If you read over the whole submission list there is a story arc in the background. The audience on Literotica would abandon me pretty quick. I also got dinged for questionable content a few times when I started. The get in and get out short entry approach limits some of these issues. the current submission I am working on right now is longer and has almost reached a length that I am worried is a slog for the readers. I am hoping to increase my output in the near future. I am eager to develop my series villains. I want to branch off the nonconsent pornography angle to establish the threat level in my overall arc.
Cool idea for a story.
Some suggestions; a local tv station owner needs ratings for his news programming and is a fan, auto show girls auditions, and maybe the company could make some cash by taking personnel requests from ex-husbands and other admirers who'd love to see more.
Thanks and keep up the good work. Short is better than nothing but just like she said a little longer would be nice.
Wow, thanks for the suggestions. I will try to use the personal request angle into the mix. I love the idea. The news angle is a very good idea too. My inspiration for the series is the movie "Used Cars" I really like the idea of live broadcast humiliation.