All Comments on 'English for Sinners Ch. 02'

confusing the characters takes a bunch away from the atory, even if it is a GREAT plotline, like yours.

I had trouble following which V girl was doing what. Some was clear, and some confusing. In one place, Val was guarding the classroom door and kissing him and sitting on his lap.

The primary interest comes from the tension of not knowing how the V girls had such impact on him. I suspect something supernatural. All of the characters seem somewhat manipulative and self-centered, although the potential for sex seems promising.

... it would be an idea to remember how to spell each girl's name?

I'm captivated. Keep going!