- Mature
- Englishman's Rose
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"What a beautiful name."
She smiled moving closer, putting her head on my chest.
I lay thinking to myself, not sure if I would be getting into Heaven, then laughed as I realised I had already gotten myself into Heaven, and was probably going to be getting into Heaven again soon. There is always hope.
The end.
If you made it this far I would appreciate if you vote and provide feedback. Thanx
- COMMENTS
sirwoodcutterover 6 years agoAuthorWhats not to like about Kentucky. Regardin the story, I had shot a multigun competition, had been ready for the rock, and was in north west kentucky, I did have the pleasure of a waitress called "Heaven", she could have been an angel. kisses to u HR
sirwoodcutterover 6 years agoAuthorHi David, thanx for feedback, I'm still a learner when it comes to writing so like to know a story is appreciated.
You wondered how I got to practise in the uk before competing in the US. I arrived in Kentucky, borrowed a pistol & holster, shot in first pistol competition for 19 years, an ipsic match. Wasn't saying it was 19 years since I had shot a pistol, that was only five years, since in Orlando in 2012 I had a few hours with a glock22 and 100rnds, and before that in 2000, so its not like I could claim that I hadn't had any practise.
Thanx
Sirwoodcutter
DavidinKentover 6 years agoBeing a competitive shooter and CCW instructor myself, I enjoyed those references and the "Condition Yellow" mindset that the main character has. Just wondering where a UK resident, even one with military background, would get the opportunity to possess the specialized firearms much less practice enough to be able to compete in the US but that is just me. Other than that, great story needs a follow up.
