All Comments on 'Enid's Erotic Fantasy'

What I read of the content was good, but the flow... or lack of it... started becoming such a hassle that I couldn't bring myself to finish the whole thing. What really killed it for me was including rape in her fantasy... I've never met a woman who WANTS to be raped, have you?

Wonderfully erotic story.

It's perfect except for two little things - him calling her a bitch (wtf?), and then the "MILF" thing. Please leave that to teenager comedies, and porn about old people. The rest of the story is fantastic.

Enid and Horace set in the 1950’s by any chance?? Any woman who pleads with a man to fuck me, rape me, hurt me put a baby in me, sounds like a neurotic housewife is likely to get whiplash as she has to spin on the spot to catch sight of him as he runs for the hills. Regardless of her being a MILF or not. The whole thing seems really bizarre.