All Comments on 'Enslave Your Slut Ch. 02'

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DryhillDryhillabout 14 years ago
SLOW DOWN

i get the idea that you want to show how the female is on something of a roller coaster ride, but just slow the pace down a little and include a bit more characterization and i would have been giving this five stars. But i have got to rush, to read the next chapter.

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