All Comments on 'Enslaved Neighbours Ch. 01'

Wouldn't hurt to get a proof reader.

I just can’t read a story when the “writer” makes no attempt at grammar or usage.

Excellent first part.

I desperate for more! Please update soon.

Interesting characters, I'm sure Derek and Martha are in for an exciting ride. Rarely do two subs make a strong couple.

Great story

No more parts to this story?

Great story hope you do more

Is there any chance of a 2nd chapter?

Great great story hope for more

Great great story hope for more chapters

Great start, well done.

Again as above comments.

I just can’t read a story when the “writer” makes no attempt at grammar or usage.