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Click hereHe grunted and groaned, throwing his head back and closing his eyes. I looked away, embarrassed.
"Watch me, pet," he demanded.
"No Andrei," I muttered, but the snap of his head told me he heard me just as well.
"What did you just call me?" His eyes were black, bottomless.
I regretted ever hearing that dreadful name.
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Good execution, although the setting and character constraints pretty much prevent it from being believable.
This seems like a promising series. I'd love to read chapter 2, you have caught my attention. 5 stars!
Again, the beginning to another of your stories feels uncomfortable for me (my problem) while inexorably drawn into this piece and the characters. Glad you enjoy “writing average stories” recognizing that your pieces are anything but average. You write very well — intriguing characters and storylines that resonate sometimes in troubling/captivating way, which are hallmarks of good erotic fiction. Should not let my comfort affect rating, though not so sure high ratings matter to you.
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