All Comments on 'Enslaved Pt. 01'

Again, the beginning to another of your stories feels uncomfortable for me (my problem) while inexorably drawn into this piece and the characters. Glad you enjoy “writing average stories” recognizing that your pieces are anything but average. You write very well — intriguing characters and storylines that resonate sometimes in troubling/captivating way, which are hallmarks of good erotic fiction. Should not let my comfort affect rating, though not so sure high ratings matter to you.

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This seems like a promising series. I'd love to read chapter 2, you have caught my attention. 5 stars!

Thank you, both of you. :)

Excellent. Please continue

Good execution, although the setting and character constraints pretty much prevent it from being believable.