All Comments on 'Enslaving Doctor Jake Ch. 01'

please continue this new relationship

Don't understand why there are two stories, but both are bad!

Yo you double it up bud . Looks like you posted two drafts. Good though

WTF!!! If confusing the reader is what you were after, you've succeeded. Don't really understand why the two stories? If writing something for people that think rape is a good thing, you succeeded there too.

Show the author respect, okay?!

When an author asks for ANY feedback, telling him that you didn't like something isn't showing disrespect, it's called being honest. Telling an author that you liked something you actually didn't isn't showing respect, it's just kissing up. We learn, grow and produce great things by listening to all opinions not just those that praise.

First, I appreciate your feedback. I apologize for the sloppy editing with this piece. I pledge to do better in the future and have no excuse for it. The corrected story edit was submitted immediately on 8/21 but it takes time to get approved by LIT. It will eventually show up (I'm confident). I have been trying to hold off on chapter 2 until the corrected version was posted, but decided to proceed with it anyway.

If you are reading this comment first, do not continue on with the story when you reach my signature. Again, thank you to anyone who reads and comments on my work. :)