All Comments on 'Enslaving Elsa Ch. 02'

Uh, no. Just NO. That was incredibly disappointing after the very promising start of chapter 1.

I mean seriously.....

"Honestly, I don't really care if you did. In fact I would be quite surprised if you managed to do anything but doze. You will learn today that your needs and desires do not matter. You are here to be a plaything for myself and my darling Sammie. Serve well and you will undoubtedly find pleasure. But if you do not learn your place..."

To me most of that statement portrays her as a shitty untrained abusive wannabe dominant. From my perspective BDSM is a symbiotic relationship. The dominant looks after the physical and emotional wants, needs and well-being of the submissive, which compliments the sub who “Serve well and you will undoubtedly find pleasure.“ soft and hard limits are an ongoing process, of course pleasure and to some degree pain go hand in hand. The pain applied should always be relevant to the subs wants, needs and limits all of which are explored and tested as per the previous sentence.

Tess (UK)

Thank you very much for your feedback Tess it is much appreciated. I understand your point of view and I am not perfect. I may have messed this one up . I wonder if others share your sentiments and will take that into consideration in future writing. I agree with you wholeheartedly, however keep in mind that not all do in the BDSM community and these are stories of course. In my opinion everything should always be consensual, but some might enjoy the aspect of not caring and wanting to break someone down . I try to cater to a variety of tastes in my writing and I am well aware that all stories of a sexual nature will be pleasing to some, and less tasteful to others . I hope you continue to read and enjoy my other stories

So hot! So deliciously written! Perfect!