All Comments on 'Entangled Pt. 08'

Disappointed, that's it after such a long wait?

Glad to have another chapter of Jess' saga! I wish it had been longer, but what we do have is a great continuation of the struggle with Eric's father and brother. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work! I'm still glad to help if you ever want a proofread :)

Rnebular

Thank you for your wonderful work, no matter how long or short it is.

Jess needs a safe place where she can process her own emotions without worrying about Eric is going to react. Eric doesn’t really get it or he would have warned Jess. Marcus is a high-functioning psychopath, and isn’t going to just roll over and play dead. He truly has no limits now that he’s becoming delusional. Good guys like Eric and Blake are handicapped by their consciences; Marcus doesn’t have one.

I process that the cowardly weasel Blake needs a good kicking at the very least. If it says something about a character being well written then he is well written because I detest him.

Would like to see more detailed exploration of Jess treatment at the resort - flashbacks? Surely there are more interactions to come with the evil father too? So many possibilities

Ever going to continue this?

I wish writers would finish the story BEFORE posting it.

We are too tangled up in their lives that we cant live without knowing the ending!

Oh no where’s the ending? Please continue!

It's time Lit only allowed FINISHED stories to be posted, far too many unfinished stories.

Any chance of this being completed?

Is this ever going to be finished?

FYI. Alex is also on WP as an author under the same name, the story continues there at Part 23

What is WP??

Wattpad

It’s another site for writers like Inkitt and Literotica.

I saw your update about the other stories... will you be finishing this one?

Is this end or will you complete the story?