All Comments on 'Enter Sandman Ch. 02'

We have all the major players on stage and the dance can

start. Thanks for writing an interesting piece

These first two chapters make for a great story. (The quality of the writing, itself, leaves something for English teachers to cringe about; but the storyline is definitely excellent.) I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

-- KK in Texas

...story a great deal. Looking forward to how the plot unfolds. -M

Great start. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story. Please post next chapters soon.

The only thing is I wish it were a bit longer chapters. I really love the way you are laying out the story line. Cant wait for the next part!

This is really frustrating (sign of a good story). You left us hanging . . . . . I guess Doug Peterson is the father and Kelly has become a slut just like Sue . . . I think Sue needs to hear how her hubby cheated on her. Slut wives often think it's OK for them but not OK for their spouses! Someone in the relationship wants the power, I suppose. Roger is sterile -- not exactly an original plot device -- so we know Kelly, pregnant, must have cheated since it is unlikely she had an immaculate conception! We certainly don't want to call her "Saint Kelly," do we? Please write some more so we don't suffocate in suspense.

Very well written. Waiting for the next chapter.

DG

please bring the next chapter quickly cant wait to know more.Anyways Meery Christmas & A Happy New Year.God Bless.

please bring the next chapter quickly cant wait to know more.Anyways Meery Christmas & A Happy New Year.God Bless.

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Thanks for sharing.

Not the real army. Spent more time in his hometown than at his base. The timeline does not work. His degree happenned too quickly.