All Comments on 'Entrapment'

Please spend some more time on your latest stories. I suspect you were in a hurry when you were writing this one. There was no Fetish description of her Sexy Feet and toes (a quick attention arousing few paragraph or two) also nothing mentioned about her hairy pussy (always a very serious attention grabber for males and females.) Additionally, the description of her nipples was mildly sexy but too limited. (thick, erect, dark,light, gigantic) Please keep writing tough, this story does have a lot potential for future chapters.

More trash from a terrible writer. He never cares to improve.

You still coming back to read more of my terrible writing