All Comments on 'Equal Shares Ch. 35'

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DesertPirateDesertPirateabout 17 years ago
An interesting story

This story has moved slowly and that might be paet of the attraction. Real life doesn't move very fast for most of us, especially in relationships. Thanks for another good read.

NookiehunterNookiehunterabout 17 years ago
Very Well Written, Butt....

This chapter is very well written, but odd. Somehow, I just don't see these characters, particularly Stan and Anne, behaving this way. It might make more sense if they all just climbed into bed and had an orgy. Orchestrating a schedule for sex with different women is nuts.

Nookiehunter

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