All Comments on 'Eric Becomes Erica Ch. 01'

THERE IS A LOT MORE TO THIS WONDERFUL STORY, THE BUILT UP WAS WONDERFUL AND DESERVES MORE CHAPTERS, FOR SURE...!

At the point when Erica removes her shorts, she should have been wearing panties. Alternatively, when she saw the movie, she could have excused herself and changed into that nightie she was wearing the night before.

Love it please keep it coming

I wish I was Erica mmm

Very well written and patiently unfolded. Interesting choice of having the tale told from the father's perspective rather than from the transsexual's. Lead-in to sex was terrific, hot and wet. One thing I felt was missing, perhaps we'll see in Chapter 02 - which I will definitely read. From this loving father so concerned about his son's psyche and development, I would expect some guilt and angst in realizing he had broken the incest taboo. I think it makes the story sexy but a man portrayed as so sensitive would have to go into a moral dilemma over what happened. It just would be in character, I think. Just talking author to author here.

The story rocks and I put my vibrator to use on second reading. So wet now!

xoxo,

Di

great story and i can't wait to see what happens next.

Very good start. I hope this continues for a while!

Wishes I was Erica. Thanks