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by ERICALEIGH

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

The sex was hot, but you need to do a better job of proof reading to eliminate misspellings and missing words. Second, quotation marks would help to define what is being said aloud from what is being thought or described. Read good quality stories to see how this is done.

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I started as a closeted crossdresser and that blossomed into crossdressing and going into the public. I got more and more adventurous while in public. One day I noticed that i was being looked at in a way a man looks at a woman. I started going to the park and sitting on diffe...