All Comments on 'Erica's Downfall'

When are you going to relate Eric's use of erica the SLUT?

I want to see her seduce him, and then I want to see her turned into the SLAVE SLUT she really is.

Oh that was so hot, I just loved the way she submitted to him, her innerself taking control of her body. YOU MUST FOLLOW UP with Eric's seduction and how her master makes her more wanton and even more submissive.

Kim UK

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Very well written. I hope you will continue with more chapters about her adventures.

Especially the twist at the end.

Keep it up

Its spelled Organization

I too have a story about an Erica. She be a bit worse yet . I think maybe I'll tell that

story sometime in the future here !

Quite similar story... I think she would not like it tp be told though...

Early on the author states her husband is a wealthy, important person in the community. Then at the beginning of the blackmail speech, the first threat is that the husband would lose his job. Make up your mind during the outlining process. Over all, the story sucks.

Oh, it's spelled organization is it? You need to know the difference between its and it's.

You also need to understand that some countries spell it organisation.

What a moon.