by RiverMaya
Lovely story. Engrossing, elegant and touching. Thank you for sharing your talent.
A six on a scale of 5. In the style of D.H. Lawrence in Lady Chatterley's Lover, but with more vivid imagery, RiverMaya has written highly literate, erotic passages that represent the best contributions to this genre on this site. They lend significant color to a fine story. Very commendable.
A story so real. Aren't we all tripping more over our own mind's games than 'fate', doubts stopping our words to The One in the right moment? Thank you for letting Erik and Christine finally find the right moment.