All Comments on 'Erik and Christine: A Re-Telling'

by RiverMaya

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Bebop3Bebop3almost 3 years ago

Lovely story. Engrossing, elegant and touching. Thank you for sharing your talent.

chastenchastenalmost 3 years ago

A wonderful story, RM.

OneAuthorOneAuthoralmost 3 years ago
Captivating

A very well-written tale, with a wonderful ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Beautiful story Maya! Thank you.

Ma8grets3weaknessesMa8grets3weaknessesalmost 3 years ago

A six on a scale of 5. In the style of D.H. Lawrence in Lady Chatterley's Lover, but with more vivid imagery, RiverMaya has written highly literate, erotic passages that represent the best contributions to this genre on this site. They lend significant color to a fine story. Very commendable.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowalmost 3 years ago

A story so real. Aren't we all tripping more over our own mind's games than 'fate', doubts stopping our words to The One in the right moment? Thank you for letting Erik and Christine finally find the right moment.

HaydenDLinderHaydenDLinderover 2 years ago

Oh my God! I wish I could give you 6 Stars!

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July 15, 2023 My poem is in the latest issue of Spirit Fire Review: https://www.spiritfirereview.com/post/new-issue-of-spirit-fire-review-1