by bthomas40
Lot of potential for future chapters. Renovations etc. hope you get some inspiration.
Would love to see more with the expansion, use the extra space into a cave like dungeon theme; theme for different months? Just saying! 😎. Love the Series and would love to read another chapter-interesting story line and character build was great.
Keep writing and hopefully posting. I too have that issue. 👍 5/5
Waiting for Eric/Erik to get himself sorted, he is making terrible mistakes/decisions and being too naïve and trusting!
This started fast and then continued to drag slowly over the last 10 chapters. Woefully incomplete, but it’s likely for the best since you wrote yourself in to something you couldn’t handle anymore. This feels unsatisfactory and was a waste of time. I really hate when “writers” abandon their stories.