All Comments on 'Erin'

When I got to the bottom of the first page and saw how many pages there were, I thought - no way. I figured I would get bored before I could finish. But it held my interest throughout. A very erotic and well written story. Thanks.

This story was amazing. I saw the length and told myself I would stop halfway through, but when I got to that point, I just couldn't turn away. I would love to see more of this story.

until i got to the bottom of the first page, I didn't realise how long the story was. But it was great! not once did I get bored...some VERY hot scenes!

thanks erin for a wonderful story. you don't get many stories with great leangth and keeping it exciting. Hope to read many more from you....

Man, what a great story. Never got bored but I sure wish you could have broken it up into chapters. My secretary is wondering what I have done all afternoon. Oops!

I LOVE A LOT THIS STORY. KEEP IT UP.

NAVAID

as with all your worksit was outstanding

Perfection! Great read!

Sexmate

Bloody marvellous!

I loved the story. I hope that there is more!

i look forward in hopes of more of this story your work is excellent

Absolutly amazing. Your writting is good and I love the subject. Please write more with this same group of people. I'd like to see her fuck Brad...

This is definitely my favorite Literotica story. Wore myself out reading it!

WOW, I hope that you will continue this story soon. I could not stop reading it till I was finished. Thanks

This was awesome! I have been wasting my 5's on other stories when this is really a step above. Where is the 6? Wow!

I've read alot of your stuff, and it is all amazing, but this just makes the rest look ... well not that good. I really hope you carry it on :) another 15 pages ;)

It's taken us 3 days to read this story! something kept coming up. It just makes you so horny? read quite alot of Tryanything's stories. They are amongst the best on litroc. this was the great. thanks and keep them coming???

Love all of tryanything's stuff, masterful writing on great subjects. More More More is what I and everyone who read this wants. Truly good stuff.

I just hope Erin doesn't lose her faith. I hope she still prays before meals and at bedtime, goes to church, and is kind to the collection plate and lights candles for people who need help. I also hope she becomes a genuine close friend to Tasha and Brian and other people, not just a sex partner. The porn industry is full of "use 'em up" scenarios where women, in particular, have sex until they lose their looks, then get dumped. There have been a few suicides and many drug addictions from the industry (this is also true of mainstream). I hope Erin can go to confession without being condemned by the priest.

Fantastic! Fantastic! Fantastic!

Can't wait for the next installment. This is a MUST read.

Excellent story! Keep up the awesome work!

Keep doin what u doin cuz u doin it well...again GOOD SHIT!

I've read all your stories and they just keep getting better and better. I love the detail. Keep it (US) up.

Well, I just spent a very pleasurable hour and a half reading about Erin and her exploits. Hugely entertaining - wow, just wow. I am so relaxed, I can barely string the words together to say how relaxed I am. TryAnything, you are truly a master craftsman. Don't ever stop writing!

I'm glad you're back. I've been waiting forever since i first started reading your submissions. They're great

Holy Shit This was Awesome

Great story. Read it in stages but well worth it. Thnaks for taking the time to write it.

I'll never get any work done!!! everything superb, but was slightly disapointed with how Erin finally lost her virginity.... and not filmed as had been suggested...

Thats the way you write a story. I loved all the details in the story please keep them coming.

I have read some long stories on Lit but this simply takes the cake. Absolutely delicious. I love incest stories and I thought I was a decent author until I read your story. Good gracious sakes alive. Thank you for writing, thank you for submitting. I guess I really need to go back to the drawing board if this is one of the top 20 incest stories on Lit. Always, E

man that was the best i've read yet. Keep going.

I would count this among my top five favorite stories on Literotica. Absolutely wonderful! When I saw how long it was, I figured I had two options: either several orgasms as I read the story, or a long buildup and then a big one. I went the latter route and I was not disappointed, as there were numerous hot scenes throughout! This story kept me on the edge the whole time and I'm still buzzing. Thank you so much for a fantastic story, and I hope you'll produce such stunning work again.

I have been reading this for a week now on my lunch breaks at work.. This could easily be a full book or the best porno movie ever.. You have adapted an entire package. A killer story line, seduction, incest, lesbian, and inner struggle.. You are the most talented story writer I have ever seen.. If you come up with any more chapters to this story please let me know..

Jimijaymez@yahoo.com

Tryanything, i've read several of your stories and it has gotten to the point where if i see your name, i read it just because i know it will be an awesome story. your an amazing writer. please please keep writing.

I have been reading literotica stories for quite some time now, and by far i have to say your story has been the most cogent, most impressive (and longest) story i have read.

you have a brilliant imaginatation and some serious writing talent, congratulations on writing an absolutly brilliant erotic story

I sent this to my girlfriend, and i know she will love it too, i cant wait to read some of your other works. This is a definate 5 on my books

Ihave just finished reading several of you erotic shorts and I throughly enjoyed the quality of the sex and the the hot erotocism that came boiling out of the story. Please Keep up the the fantastic work/ this is the first time since being on the internet in eight years that I have ever responded to an Auther much less a web site but I feelconstrained to do so.

Well, since all the comments have been nothing but raving

so far, I think I'll throw in a bit of criticism. This is

not to say I didn't like the story, I found it quite

entertaining, but the plot structure lacks

coherence somewhat. Some of the scenes were repetitive (go

to the beach, have Brad come by and apply the lotion, over

and over again), and others seemed not to go anywhere.

Also, the characters could have been less superhuman. Not

everyone needs to have voluptous breasts or an ever-erect

cock. I know, this is fantasy, but I like mine with a

little more believability. Just a personal preference. Your

writing style, on the other hand, is nice, and you handled

your scenes quite well, if a little shallowly, when it

comes to female characters. I did notice a couple of

stylistical glitches, but they were rather few and far

between. Overall, good work, but not excellent!

I usually don't read real long stories, but the story grabbed my attention RIGHT OFF. It got kind of repetitive and wasn't very realistic, but damn did it get me hot!

The ending was kind of abrupt however. I would of recommended posting it as several smaller stories...

BUT i can't wait to see what her first movie (if she makes one) is going to be like!

I started reading this at about 10 and I just finished at 12:44. I am impressed and have added you to my favorite authors list. Makes me want to write again! I really loved both Tasha and Erin. Keep up the good work!!

I've enjoyed your stories and this is no exception. The only criticism I could offer is that "Jamaal" usually uses two a's in his name.

Roadie

Good,very good, not great lit. It was way too long. The ending was too predictable. That said, it was great wanking off material.

bgp

I found this story and just wanted to add my 2 cents. I agree with another who said this is one of the best five stories I have read on this site. The sex was hot, and the storyline flowed. I will read more of your stuff.

Jacqui

OMG I loved this story i wish i could give it a 20 it was perfect even though it was long i couldnt stop reading it i loved it. I think you should makae another one where she get in the bussniess. that would be cool.

I am so far behind in work today because I couldn't stop reading the stories. I finished all 15 and feel like Erin did after leaving the booth!!!!

Damn, that was awesome. As a lot of people before me i coulndt stop myself from reading until the end. Wondefull story, i hope your other ones are like this...

I really loved reading this story. It took a while to read just because of how long it is, but it was well worth my time. I couldn't stop reading, I was so caught up in Erin's escapades. I hope to read more about her.

Fabulous story! Beautiful imagery, lots of cunnilingus, and sex for sex's sake. Also, your grammar and spelling are practically perfect; very important but oft-neglected aspects of any kind of writing.

all i can say is wow!! that was one of the hottest stories i ever read. i must say it kept me wet the whole time very good and i hope to see more bravo!!!!

I have been through alot of stories on here .. most good but not all ... BUT OMG i could NOT stop reading this story.. i must have MORE ... i truly hope u are going to add more !!!!!! ~K~

fantastic-only didn't like male amd male-but what a great story-need more of this-how about a sequel?

What a wonderful, sexy, outragously HOT story! I couldn't quit reading it, start to finish, without ever getting up or touching the keyboard with more than one hand. ;) Keep up the good work. Once again, AWESOME!

asdf

Thats the best way to describe it. Good God was that an awesome story.

Pretty well written. Except for one thing (think of it as constructive crtitism): you kept talking about arching backs. Maybe just tone that down, but otherwise it was still great.

awesome one of the best sotires i ever read i came twice n my wifes mouth while reading it brings back memories of our youth when we played with our parents n then each others parents.

I haven't moved from my computer all day...talk about the lazy days of summer. The scenes depicted got me so hot that I wore out one of my toys. I know the batteries are dead now - but I wonder if I've broken my vibe from over use. Such wonderful use it was. I sit here still shaking. I'd love to meet Erin some day...ahh the things I would do to her....

Great story line. Either you have one incredible imagination or have experienced this kind of story in some form or other in real life. Either way, you spin a tale that is rich in detail without getting in the way of the continuity and flow of your plot. Thank you. So many of the stories on this site need so much editing it is unbelievable, but your story was a pleasure.

this story was very hot until the last scene... maybe it should have ended like this after the glory hole gang bang erin contracted aids and died

Thanks for another great, long, hugely erotic story! Please continue. I wish only that my dreams were half as good.

WOW... that is all I can say... I can't even remember how many times I orgasmed while reading this story. Even thinking back on the story now gets my pussy all wet...

in this site, i have read more than 5000 stories about incest... thus far... i have read many poorly written... passionless stories... and didn't compell myself to vote for them..... everyone has his own choice, and others should respect that... despite remembering this, i can't help noting that this is the worst story i have ever read.. if the writer were incapable, then, no regrets.. but, a writer with such a power using his potentialites on absolutely bullshit things..... i am asking u and others that have anyone, anyone found a bit of love or passion that should be present between people having sexual relationships(in incest, it should be more) .... the picture u protrayed may be is of authentic value as compared to the present world... but, again, isn't it the picture that human civilization left long ago? passionless sex, almost like animal.... why we r human then? i am not accusing u, i am just stunned at the detailing of this sort of thought... i hope others who have enjoyed the story might have taken this lightly, only for sexual pleasure.. but, we must give insights too... according to Hobbes, this is where we lived before the so-called social contract.... i appologise for my perhaps rude comment, but, i do feel that even in the incest stories, the passion of love, the bond should be more detailed, not animalisticc... we may refer to Starlight or Mikelh or Emmah and others too... pls, use u power... if u r devoid of humane feelings... then, don't pay any attention.. and continue doing the fuckfest u were doing....adios..... and, speaking very critically, u just dismissed the ways of religion by emanating aspirations to do pornos... life can be lead better without both of these ways...

Quite frankly, I couldn't care less about the 'feelings' you missed in this story. I thought there were plenty of feelings going around. Face it, this is about INCEST, not about some Polyannaesque love story. As for putting raw animal sex above religion, well, of course. One is based on reality, the other is based on fantasy. I consider religion to be the biggest mass mental illness in human history. It is for the weak and pathetic who are afraid to face life and need some crutch to justify their lives. Well, I don't need any such thing myself. I find that I am a complete being with the ability to decide what is right and wrong with life and to live accordingly. You want religion, go to church or worship a piece of mold on a leaf in a forest. This site is for stories about sex. No caveats about 'reality' or 'true love'. I consider the previous comment on this story to be the most ludicrous comment I've ever read about any story here at Literotica. You are seriously in need of a reality check.

Cheers!!!

damn that was LONG.... really nice... i appriciate the work and effort put into this....

This was an extremely well written story. That's all I can say. Way to go.

Catholic initiate turned raving cum slut/future porn queen. Sounds like my first marriage, the rub being I only got the Catholic part. This is my second read, and I still come away feeling like the corn fed kid that I felt like the first time. This shit really happens? Fuuhhhck...

i loved this story great detail, passion and all the great elements. i liked it all the end was great but wasnt as good as it could've been if i had wrote it it would've ended with her losing her virginity in a movie to her dad, and her costume would've been here nun outfit HOT. Nevertheless great read thanks.

That was absolutely amazing, thank you!

Killer story, just absolutely awesome.

This has to be THE single most erotic story I have ever read. Your stories continue to amaze me, but this story defines erotica. I feel bad for anyone who has to go through life missing this.

Great story..i loved the length and detail...i felt like i was there

i cant believe i just found this after so mant hours on literotica. then i read the mostly moronic comments. come on...this is fun. ive never found an incestual cunt of cock on my screen, just words. i think i am one of the horniest persons in history, i casnt imagine being swexually aroused by my flesh and blood. but this is not llife. this is great writing. i can believe how many times you made the scenarios different..not the same thing over and over. will the wsorld ever get used to the idea that there is nothing holy about sex. fucking, sucking...its asll good and too fucking good to be used only to create life. great wrtiting/

I couldn't believe the effort put into this story. The character development was amazing. My pussy was drooling the whole read, and what a long read it was! I want more. You are by far the most creative writer I have encountered on Literotic thus far. Keep it up!

What can I say that has not already been said, I loved it and think I will get my wife to read your story, I feel the story is sensitive, yet direct would raise some eye brows and questions in our ordered society.

I was delighted and amazed by your "Erin" saga and it did make a dull Sunday remarkably fun. I am eager to explore the rest of your canon. Thanks and good luck

Your attention to detail is amazing. I don't think I even saw a misspelled word. I hope this was based on a personal experience. How could one person even imagine the details you developed. Looking forward to the continuation of Erins'

adventures in the family business.

This is just too good. I can't even cum up with the words to explain how good this story is. Even though this story is 15 pages long I stayed hard the whole time. Not once did the story get boring or tiresome. I really don't know how you cum up with so much detail and plot twist. I am now truly a fan of your work. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

"Erin" is the second of TryAnything's stories I've read, "Cheerleader" being the first. I can't believe how good this author is!!!!....keeping me edging the entire time, every chapter, hanging on every word.

I've put the entire list of stories in my favorites and can barely wait to read and enjoy all the carnal pleasure in store for me. It's obvious from the other comments that I'm not alone.

I'll bet the author revels in knowing how much erotic pleasure he's brought to us readers/lovers of erotica.

I am, for one, very grateful.

I realize it is two years old,...but I just read Forlornwalk's criticism of this Author.

I'm continually amazed someone can visit Literotica and critisize like that. No wonder the name Is "Forlorn"!!!

TryAnything is correct about religion in his reply to Forlornwalk.

As Arthur C. Clarke is quoted as saying..to the best I can remember.."Humanity's greatest tragedy is the hijacking of morality by Religion".

I also agree with the comment of another reader about how exciting it would be for Erin to give her virginity to her Father while dressed in her Nun attire. Woof...!!!...now that would be hot.

I'm not criticizing the Author's ending by any means....I think he is terrific.

LOL, besides, this is great autoeroticism material!!!

great story. keep writing!!

This is my favorite story on the entire website. I have re-read this several times over the years, and it still holds my attention as well as leaving me wanting more. Thank you for the thorough plot line, and character development, yet never leaving me bored or disinterested in the plot or the characters.

hi there this is a good story cant wait for the rest

man u rock. i cant believe how good of a writer u r thanks for the pleasure

I loved this story, I can't count how many times I got off to this. Keep up the good work!

Dear TRYANYTHING. Firstly i have to thank you for the last 6 orgasms i had. You have a gift with words. And the picture's that you can creat with them are beautiful. It took me the entire day to read this story. Every spare chance i got alone was used well. I also wanted to commend you on you reply to that forlorn idiot, who's obvious self importance is not completely in balance. Your story was beautiful. True there was no undying love. But this is incest. Do we really need them to be soulmates as well? I can't tell you that this is my favourite story on literotica because there are so many of your stories that i love. But it excited me beyond belief, and helped me to reach a new record for orgasms in one single sitting. (or lying as the case may be) Once again well done and congrats. Your very fortunate to have such a gift and obviously intelligent enough to know how to use it. Loved it. Teresa.

I must learn to quit starting one of TryAnything's stories at midnight. I stay up far too late to finish them. They are page turners, everyone of them.

Thanks, TA, for some of the most exciting stories I enjoyed here.

I can't even begin to describe how much i love your stories. i pretty much stay up all night when i start reading and just get off constantly. i am in love.

what can i say but fucking fantastic...so much fucking going on,i cant wait for the rest of the story where erin starts in the family buisness by getting in front of the camers and fucking with jason.

I really k\like your story lines and the flow of the story.Great fucking and sucking descriptions make you feel like you are there.

Can't wait for the continuation.

grassman

You should write a part with her and Jason getting together... And her making her first porno, with Jason and Brian and Bill, and then her first lesbian porn with her Mom and Tanya... I've read this story like a million times and no matter which ones i've read this still stays as my favorite.

I can only reiterate what everyone else has said. You are, in my opinion, the best writer on here by a country mile. You paint such a vivid picture that one cannot fail to imagine actually being there. Thank you so much for such wonderfully erotic tales. I will never tire of reading your amazing work ;) xxx

Thanks so much for the fic, its sooo hot. Perfect way to occupy my time! I love Erin and the way you didn't rush her.

I have read a lot of stories, but you wrote with compassion, affection, and honor. Really really nice. :)

i've read a handful of your stories here. so far, this is the best one i've read of yours. congrats. great job!

BEST STORY EVER!

So good I had to comment - and I never comment. You are a genius!

Sooooo looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

Doesn't anyone just fuck any more?

This was a well constructed story. I loved the way you led up to the deflowering of Erin and then developed her as a real sex fiend. Your character development was stylish and added to the brilliance of the work. Well done.

This is the third story of yours that I have read. I absolutely could not put it down! So absolutely WONDERFUL! My husband asked me, "What in the hell are you reading?" I told him and then he explained that it smelled like fresh sex around my chair but now he knows why. It made him have a big smile on his face. Thank you for experiencing things I haven't before through reading you stories! Please, please keep writing more juicy stories like this one! Hot damn!

I enjoyed it immensely but I thought it would have been better if you had made it so that she lost her virginity to her brother...it seemed to come out of left field that she wanted her dad to be her first. Also, I think you need to put more detail into the descriptions of the men...as much as I loved the story it was hard to get into because I had no clue what the men looked like !

Well delivered, brilliant planning and conversation. I loved it, a lot longer than I would have thought going in, but entertaining. Keep going, you are brilliant, don't worry about anonymous flamers.... no guts, no glory, wankers all of 'em.

I was just glancing through stories at work killing time tryin to find stories for later when i stumbled upon this gem.

I couldn't stop reading needing to know more about Erin

Great work!!