All Comments on 'Erin'

Until the last few pages I was really enjoying this story and thinking that 5 wasn't enough. But the last few pages were so unrealistic that it completely spoiled it for me. I gave it 4, but was tempted to give it only 2, because I felt I wasted a good few hours on a story, expecting a great ending which never came. Waking up in the morning after an evening of sex and more sex in the middle of the night, then more sex in the morning without any time to attend to normal bodily functions or washing. Then off to the beach without any breakfast for more sex. Not even the most desperate sex enthusiast would or world do that. The dimensions were also very unrealistic. Anal penetration 8 inches deep on the first time would be dangerous as well as difficult to achieve without anal training over weeks and even then very risky. I realise it's all a fantasy, but when the fantasy becomes so ridiculous I lose interest. So, for me it was great story, ruined by the ending. Erin was looking forward to having her brother and/or father come in her. pussy. Tasha had even said early on that losing her virginity would be best left until it was being filmed. For me that would have been a much better ending, especially if it was also part of a porn shoot.

Another super hot story from TryAnything. 5 star from my side

I loved it, please keep it going

amazing storyline and would love to see what Erin and family get up to next

This story weirded me out because my friends name is Erin and she looks exactly like described in the story. Hopefully she’s not up to all of this!

I started this story some time ago and couldn't find it again but finally did and glad. one of the best I've come across here.

I started this story some time ago and couldn't find it again but finally did and glad. one of the best I've come across here.

One of the best on this site. Sure, there are a lot of “how?”, but this is a good story told convincingly.

It’s a fucking hot story, do u really have to ruin eroticism but putting real life into it. Just enjoy the hot sexy ness and leave ur real life comparisons out of it.

Erin coming come almost a nun and a virgin in all senses doesn't fall off deep end that quickly. Goes from not driving to having a car and driving alone in a one day. Next goes from virgin to a lesbian relationship and double deflowered by dad and brother. Then she is able to suck off 5 black porn stars but takes a cock in vagina and ass that won't fit in mouth in a just a few days. Then she is taking all these cocks bareback even people she doesn't even know yuck.

But, I don't get how a girl in a convent from 12 - 18 has a drivers license.

i would like to read about her video career

Terrific description of the travails of a young woman liberating herself from the claws of a superstition-based, inhuman, life-denying environment, and of the triumphant realization of her human and sexual potential. Heaven is right here on Earth.

As an aside, in the story, mention is made of the Devil. However, the Devil did offer Eve the key to knowledge - and thus may have made her to become orgasmic. Another name for the Devil is Lucifer, "He who carries light". Hmmm... Could it be that what some call the Devil be in fact the source of enlightenment..?

Erin need to go on birth control and then start working behind the camera and in front. more please

Is was so logical she should lose her virginity on camera in her first starring role. So why not?

This is a one of the best stories I've ever read. Please add to it

This is a great story. Please add to it

This was a very fun and interesting story. I can't wait to read more.

Erin should go back to the Nunnery for a rest. Poor thing.

Wow what a deliberate lead to a finale. I thoughly enjoyed the story. I could'nt even go to tje bathroom, which iI shall do now.

I like how you actually made it a slow progression after the initial cock sucking fetish. It's rare to see a blossoming of actually fucking happening at the end of such a long story!

I hope that you are going to do a sequel sometime to Erin...

I can't wait for more.

This is by far the best read. The story line and development were amazing

Wonderful Cum filled story. Erin likes cum as much as I do. Cum is very addictive and don't forget that it's full of protein. I loved the story even if it was a bit OTT.

Fleur xxx

I've read this before, but it seemed even better the second time.

Erin is one bad girl. She has sure learned some dirty habits since leaving the convent!

It would have been nice to have read about her porn movie debut, but that in no way detracts from the overall story.

Wasn't Erin supposed to be filmed when she lost her cherry for the good of the family business?

Titillating, somewhat exciting, but...I got tired of very repetitious scenes with repetitious language. Everyone's different and I prefer at least a little more creativity and a little character development. Plus, I think Erin would have been more interesting if the author explored, even a little, the embarrassment and guilt associated with her sexual experimentation before she became a full blown slut.

But, I'm in the minority, so enjoy.

This was a really well written story. Nicely presented, well constructed and written. The only thing I might have changed, and it is only because my personal fetishes lean that way, is that I would have had Erin actually be a full-fledged nun, one about 7-10 years into her service. Perhaps she might have had to go home for a death in the family. I think for someone like this, a personal struggle against such a downfall as Erin was originally fighting might have been a bit more exciting to read as she would have had more years of built-in defenses to protect her and for the protagonists to have to work to break down than did your Erin here. That fight with her conscience and inner desires would have seemed much more sincere and been all the more appetizing and and then sexually relieving to us once all those walls and defenses crumbled. Still this was a great read, and had to be for me to actually read through the entire 15 pages. Usually, I see a story is that long and I quit at the first page. Look forward to reading more of your works.

I'm sorry I had to give up about half way through - not enough time to finish yet - later, I hope. But this seems to be a beautiful evocation of the conflict between the artificial "rules" that self authorized "Authorities" try to inflict on people, and the reality that nature allows us to do just about anything. Decent people, of course, limit themselves to things that they would want done to them by others, but that leaves a whole lot of leeway, and a whole lot of pleasure during our lives. WONDERFUL!

Great story well written. Disappointed that Erin was not deflowered on film, I had been expecting it. Keep going.

I loved this story !!!

Cant wait for more !!

You have a fabulous career ahead of you as a writer.

Please keep up the good work.

This is an excellent story! Please submit more. The innocent girl awakening to her desires is incredibly hot and alluring. Love love loved it!!!!

Cant wait to read the rest of this story keep up the good work !!!

This is a great story of the awakening of a young girl to the pleasures of life. The fact that her teachers are her mother, father and brother only make it better. This would make a great movie. My fingers were in my own wet pussy as I read this and I enjoyed multiple orgasims. Both the lesbian sex and the fucking and cock sucking were described perfectly by thus obviously talented author.

This story was amazing. I would love to see more of this story. Thank you

Great story! I was fantasizing about an innocent young woman who was debating entering the nunnery and being suduced out of it.

WOW simply the best once i started reading i couldnt stop just reading this story got my pussy wet if i could give u stars id give u 100s!!!

great story, like all others all I can say is wow and I couldn't stop reading once I started/ ty

I'd like to publish this story. If you are interested, please visit onehandedreads.com for details. Thanks! ~ Roxy

Great story!

You are a really good writter. . . The storys run smooth and the sex is amazing! ! !

THIS STORY WAS THE HOT. I JACKED OFF SO MANY TIMES I LOST TRACK. LOVE IT. I WANT MORE STORIES.

actually the liveaboard fun story was 03 this one was 04 loved both but this one is by far my favorite thus far on lit

I sadly assume that there will be no more additions to this story line since it was added in 03 but I still have to say I loved this story and truely wish you would consider continuing it.

I just finished reading about Erin's sexual adventures. It took a long time to complete it because I came almost as many times as she did.

This was so much fun, I'm going to look for more of your stories.

Thanks!

I just didn't want that to end. Great writing!

loved erin's character really enjoyed her sexual awakening,,,the time just flew by reading this story,,,,cannot imagine adding anything more to this but too bad it has to end,,,,makes me want to have a sexually enlightened family like this one!!

This was nicely written but it was about three time longer than it should have been, Overdose. It just got old :-(

loved it!! And am hoping for and looking forward to more! It definitely needs to continue

My pussy is jealous!

I have read this story many times and each time feels like the first it's so good. When I get bored with other stories, I usually come back to this one or one of your others. This one just sticks with me. I usually can't remember the name and author of the story but this one I always remember both.

I don't agree with other people on adding more or writing a second chapter. The Erin character is fully developed and doesn't really need anything more.

DLK

P.S. If you need an editor, I am ALWAYS available.

LOVED IT hope that u might continue this one

your writing flows so well, and the dialogue is fluid and realistic. each character has a distinctive voice, and i was able to connect with them. very nice buildup and plot development, and loved that there was always "something next" that i wasn't expecting! not just your average sexy scenes :)

I was just glancing through stories at work killing time tryin to find stories for later when i stumbled upon this gem.

I couldn't stop reading needing to know more about Erin

Great work!!

Well delivered, brilliant planning and conversation. I loved it, a lot longer than I would have thought going in, but entertaining. Keep going, you are brilliant, don't worry about anonymous flamers.... no guts, no glory, wankers all of 'em.

I enjoyed it immensely but I thought it would have been better if you had made it so that she lost her virginity to her brother...it seemed to come out of left field that she wanted her dad to be her first. Also, I think you need to put more detail into the descriptions of the men...as much as I loved the story it was hard to get into because I had no clue what the men looked like !

This is the third story of yours that I have read. I absolutely could not put it down! So absolutely WONDERFUL! My husband asked me, "What in the hell are you reading?" I told him and then he explained that it smelled like fresh sex around my chair but now he knows why. It made him have a big smile on his face. Thank you for experiencing things I haven't before through reading you stories! Please, please keep writing more juicy stories like this one! Hot damn!

This was a well constructed story. I loved the way you led up to the deflowering of Erin and then developed her as a real sex fiend. Your character development was stylish and added to the brilliance of the work. Well done.

Sooooo looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

Doesn't anyone just fuck any more?

BEST STORY EVER!

So good I had to comment - and I never comment. You are a genius!

i've read a handful of your stories here. so far, this is the best one i've read of yours. congrats. great job!

I have read a lot of stories, but you wrote with compassion, affection, and honor. Really really nice. :)

Thanks so much for the fic, its sooo hot. Perfect way to occupy my time! I love Erin and the way you didn't rush her.

I can only reiterate what everyone else has said. You are, in my opinion, the best writer on here by a country mile. You paint such a vivid picture that one cannot fail to imagine actually being there. Thank you so much for such wonderfully erotic tales. I will never tire of reading your amazing work ;) xxx

You should write a part with her and Jason getting together... And her making her first porno, with Jason and Brian and Bill, and then her first lesbian porn with her Mom and Tanya... I've read this story like a million times and no matter which ones i've read this still stays as my favorite.

I really k\like your story lines and the flow of the story.Great fucking and sucking descriptions make you feel like you are there.

Can't wait for the continuation.

grassman

what can i say but fucking fantastic...so much fucking going on,i cant wait for the rest of the story where erin starts in the family buisness by getting in front of the camers and fucking with jason.

I can't even begin to describe how much i love your stories. i pretty much stay up all night when i start reading and just get off constantly. i am in love.

I must learn to quit starting one of TryAnything's stories at midnight. I stay up far too late to finish them. They are page turners, everyone of them.

Thanks, TA, for some of the most exciting stories I enjoyed here.

Dear TRYANYTHING. Firstly i have to thank you for the last 6 orgasms i had. You have a gift with words. And the picture's that you can creat with them are beautiful. It took me the entire day to read this story. Every spare chance i got alone was used well. I also wanted to commend you on you reply to that forlorn idiot, who's obvious self importance is not completely in balance. Your story was beautiful. True there was no undying love. But this is incest. Do we really need them to be soulmates as well? I can't tell you that this is my favourite story on literotica because there are so many of your stories that i love. But it excited me beyond belief, and helped me to reach a new record for orgasms in one single sitting. (or lying as the case may be) Once again well done and congrats. Your very fortunate to have such a gift and obviously intelligent enough to know how to use it. Loved it. Teresa.

I loved this story, I can't count how many times I got off to this. Keep up the good work!

man u rock. i cant believe how good of a writer u r thanks for the pleasure

hi there this is a good story cant wait for the rest

This is my favorite story on the entire website. I have re-read this several times over the years, and it still holds my attention as well as leaving me wanting more. Thank you for the thorough plot line, and character development, yet never leaving me bored or disinterested in the plot or the characters.

great story. keep writing!!

I realize it is two years old,...but I just read Forlornwalk's criticism of this Author.

I'm continually amazed someone can visit Literotica and critisize like that. No wonder the name Is "Forlorn"!!!

TryAnything is correct about religion in his reply to Forlornwalk.

As Arthur C. Clarke is quoted as saying..to the best I can remember.."Humanity's greatest tragedy is the hijacking of morality by Religion".

I also agree with the comment of another reader about how exciting it would be for Erin to give her virginity to her Father while dressed in her Nun attire. Woof...!!!...now that would be hot.

I'm not criticizing the Author's ending by any means....I think he is terrific.

LOL, besides, this is great autoeroticism material!!!

"Erin" is the second of TryAnything's stories I've read, "Cheerleader" being the first. I can't believe how good this author is!!!!....keeping me edging the entire time, every chapter, hanging on every word.

I've put the entire list of stories in my favorites and can barely wait to read and enjoy all the carnal pleasure in store for me. It's obvious from the other comments that I'm not alone.

I'll bet the author revels in knowing how much erotic pleasure he's brought to us readers/lovers of erotica.

I am, for one, very grateful.

This is just too good. I can't even cum up with the words to explain how good this story is. Even though this story is 15 pages long I stayed hard the whole time. Not once did the story get boring or tiresome. I really don't know how you cum up with so much detail and plot twist. I am now truly a fan of your work. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Your attention to detail is amazing. I don't think I even saw a misspelled word. I hope this was based on a personal experience. How could one person even imagine the details you developed. Looking forward to the continuation of Erins'

adventures in the family business.

I was delighted and amazed by your "Erin" saga and it did make a dull Sunday remarkably fun. I am eager to explore the rest of your canon. Thanks and good luck

What can I say that has not already been said, I loved it and think I will get my wife to read your story, I feel the story is sensitive, yet direct would raise some eye brows and questions in our ordered society.

I couldn't believe the effort put into this story. The character development was amazing. My pussy was drooling the whole read, and what a long read it was! I want more. You are by far the most creative writer I have encountered on Literotic thus far. Keep it up!

i cant believe i just found this after so mant hours on literotica. then i read the mostly moronic comments. come on...this is fun. ive never found an incestual cunt of cock on my screen, just words. i think i am one of the horniest persons in history, i casnt imagine being swexually aroused by my flesh and blood. but this is not llife. this is great writing. i can believe how many times you made the scenarios different..not the same thing over and over. will the wsorld ever get used to the idea that there is nothing holy about sex. fucking, sucking...its asll good and too fucking good to be used only to create life. great wrtiting/

Great story..i loved the length and detail...i felt like i was there

This has to be THE single most erotic story I have ever read. Your stories continue to amaze me, but this story defines erotica. I feel bad for anyone who has to go through life missing this.

Killer story, just absolutely awesome.

That was absolutely amazing, thank you!

i loved this story great detail, passion and all the great elements. i liked it all the end was great but wasnt as good as it could've been if i had wrote it it would've ended with her losing her virginity in a movie to her dad, and her costume would've been here nun outfit HOT. Nevertheless great read thanks.

Catholic initiate turned raving cum slut/future porn queen. Sounds like my first marriage, the rub being I only got the Catholic part. This is my second read, and I still come away feeling like the corn fed kid that I felt like the first time. This shit really happens? Fuuhhhck...

This was an extremely well written story. That's all I can say. Way to go.

damn that was LONG.... really nice... i appriciate the work and effort put into this....

Quite frankly, I couldn't care less about the 'feelings' you missed in this story. I thought there were plenty of feelings going around. Face it, this is about INCEST, not about some Polyannaesque love story. As for putting raw animal sex above religion, well, of course. One is based on reality, the other is based on fantasy. I consider religion to be the biggest mass mental illness in human history. It is for the weak and pathetic who are afraid to face life and need some crutch to justify their lives. Well, I don't need any such thing myself. I find that I am a complete being with the ability to decide what is right and wrong with life and to live accordingly. You want religion, go to church or worship a piece of mold on a leaf in a forest. This site is for stories about sex. No caveats about 'reality' or 'true love'. I consider the previous comment on this story to be the most ludicrous comment I've ever read about any story here at Literotica. You are seriously in need of a reality check.

Cheers!!!

in this site, i have read more than 5000 stories about incest... thus far... i have read many poorly written... passionless stories... and didn't compell myself to vote for them..... everyone has his own choice, and others should respect that... despite remembering this, i can't help noting that this is the worst story i have ever read.. if the writer were incapable, then, no regrets.. but, a writer with such a power using his potentialites on absolutely bullshit things..... i am asking u and others that have anyone, anyone found a bit of love or passion that should be present between people having sexual relationships(in incest, it should be more) .... the picture u protrayed may be is of authentic value as compared to the present world... but, again, isn't it the picture that human civilization left long ago? passionless sex, almost like animal.... why we r human then? i am not accusing u, i am just stunned at the detailing of this sort of thought... i hope others who have enjoyed the story might have taken this lightly, only for sexual pleasure.. but, we must give insights too... according to Hobbes, this is where we lived before the so-called social contract.... i appologise for my perhaps rude comment, but, i do feel that even in the incest stories, the passion of love, the bond should be more detailed, not animalisticc... we may refer to Starlight or Mikelh or Emmah and others too... pls, use u power... if u r devoid of humane feelings... then, don't pay any attention.. and continue doing the fuckfest u were doing....adios..... and, speaking very critically, u just dismissed the ways of religion by emanating aspirations to do pornos... life can be lead better without both of these ways...

WOW... that is all I can say... I can't even remember how many times I orgasmed while reading this story. Even thinking back on the story now gets my pussy all wet...

Thanks for another great, long, hugely erotic story! Please continue. I wish only that my dreams were half as good.

this story was very hot until the last scene... maybe it should have ended like this after the glory hole gang bang erin contracted aids and died

Great story line. Either you have one incredible imagination or have experienced this kind of story in some form or other in real life. Either way, you spin a tale that is rich in detail without getting in the way of the continuity and flow of your plot. Thank you. So many of the stories on this site need so much editing it is unbelievable, but your story was a pleasure.

I haven't moved from my computer all day...talk about the lazy days of summer. The scenes depicted got me so hot that I wore out one of my toys. I know the batteries are dead now - but I wonder if I've broken my vibe from over use. Such wonderful use it was. I sit here still shaking. I'd love to meet Erin some day...ahh the things I would do to her....

awesome one of the best sotires i ever read i came twice n my wifes mouth while reading it brings back memories of our youth when we played with our parents n then each others parents.

Pretty well written. Except for one thing (think of it as constructive crtitism): you kept talking about arching backs. Maybe just tone that down, but otherwise it was still great.