All Comments on 'Erotic Day in the Kitchen'

by Peppydoll

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 1 year ago
"Yes, daddy" a great addition to and amazing story.

Sexually frustrated attractive people do find each other. Sometimes in a taboo manner.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When is he going to accidentally get her pregnant?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

10 inches, stopped reading

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

stopped reading at "10 inches"...what bullshit.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 1 year ago

The writing was horrible enough to ruin it, but it didn't really have anything of substance to ruin. There was zero creativity, and even less of anything interesting. While you're only behind 2 attempted stories, you should stop.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 1 year ago

too short - the story, not the dick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ridiculous

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

really ? Ten inches...I would have thought anyone would realize what a cliche that is...

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