by JessLansdown
I think your ratings would be higher if you posted longer or more complete chapters/sections. It’s hard to follow with any continuity with these short excerpts dropping days/weeks apart. I have to go back and re-read the previous blurb to remember the storyline. Think I’ll just wait until it’s concluded so I can read it all in one go.
Third time's a charm. The third person would be as well, in time for the third chapter. That should be three times as long. Thanks lovely