All Comments on 'Escape Room for Jocks Pt. 07'

by MrSunshineBoy

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HHYagamiHHYagamiover 3 years ago
Beautiful chapter

I have to say, i really like this story: the pacing is steady, there is subtle romance between the couples and the evolution of the relationship is believable. The tasks are funny to read and i like their complexity.

It's not really believable that no one has come yet, they can't reach the limit everytime with a "last second" recovery. I think it's time to see one of the teams lose their points. But i'm sure you already planned when and why.

I really enjoy reading this series, i was waiting for this chapter and surely i will wait for the next one. Take your time, you are doing a good job.

squirtypunisher093squirtypunisher093over 3 years ago
Great series

Great stories! I love the character development. It's also really hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

damn so hot I still wouldn't mind being one of these guys

dnsontndnsontnalmost 2 years ago

I am thoroughly enjoying your wild imagination, Author!

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