All Comments on 'Espied Pt. 12'

Many thanks for taking up the suggestion.

As always a very stimulating read and the atmosphere at the abandoned quarry exceeds even my phantasy. Hope Sal has the chance to meet Mrs Godiva again and will learn more about the charm of corporal punishment.

These are excellent. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I don't know what to say Max Sal's fall into depravity needs a resolution she either becomes the plaything of the community she has made or she extricates herself from it. I, being a romantic would like to see her settle herself somewhere preferably with someone she loves. Fancy a trip to Australia?

Well, this made a delightful coming of sexual age tale with Sal. We never really get to know how old she is, so it's up to the reader to put it in context with their imagination. A great story and almost unlimited future tales. Paul and Cleo, Lady Godiva and more of the black Adonis. A series started in 2018 and possibly continuing today by a master of erotic literature. Thank you Max for bring forth this mighty story of lust not love. It is truly a masterpiece.