All Comments on 'Eta Carinae Pt. 01'

by Tesseract2021

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Broadus almost 2 years ago

More installments, please

Shameless_Taboos almost 2 years ago

Lots of detail and good pacing, well done. 5 stars from me :)

Frankie1952 almost 2 years ago

More please, great start.

SonoranSon500 over 1 year ago

Great interior dialogue

slimv over 1 year ago

That was so beautiful!

Anonymousover 1 year ago

Great start…nothing hotter than a confident, assertive, if perhaps self-centered mother…hopefully she goes after what she wants

Anonymousabout 1 year ago

Very hot story. But your grammar and diction are a train wreck. Get an editor!

Anonymous8 months ago

Mother fucking son and son fucking slut can truly get you hot. A great beginning with an assertive sexy single mother and sex starved jittery son. The details are nice and hot hope it turns more steamy and vulgar

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I'm a long-time writer of short stories and novellas. The erotica genre I approach with a level of reality. I usually write from the first person with attention paid to 'showing' the reader, rather than 'telling'. I use the 'stream of consciousness' method in my writing. Chap...

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