All Comments on 'Eta Carinae Pt. 05'

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slimv over 1 year ago

As wonderful as the chapters that proceeded it. Love Mom's cigarette holder! So does David! Elegant. The introduction to Paige is worrisome. I do hope Mom and David can maintain a monogamous relationship.

01Timber67 7 months ago

I hope mom and David don’t go down the path of a 3 some that would put a damper on their relationship. What about the 3 men with the girls ??? That was never mentioned

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I'm a long-time writer of short stories and novellas. The erotica genre I approach with a level of reality. I usually write from the first person with attention paid to 'showing' the reader, rather than 'telling'. I use the 'stream of consciousness' method in my writing. Chap...

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