All Comments on 'Ethnic Minority Girl'

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teasle420teasle420almost 16 years ago
what the heck happened!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

there was nothing in between. not how they met. its missing crucial parts to the story therefore it was pretty flat. sorry but this story should have been called 'woman with the red hat'!!!!!!!!!!

SEVERUSMAXSEVERUSMAXover 17 years ago
This will be mentioned on the AH.

Short and sweet, this story made up for lack of dialogue with plenty of unusual twists, exotic sensuality, and sense of fantasy. All of that for a painting of a lovely Chinese girl! It was like Pygmalion and Galatea, that sort of idea. I give it a 5.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Cleverly Written!

Very talented effort about reactions from an Artist's painting. How this beautiful painting stirs the emotions of the person viewing it igniting his desires and longings. Very well written.

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