All Comments on 'Eva Pt. 04'

Very sweet, very loving, emotional and hart rending! `Great series looking forward to the next instalment.

Cheers

SAGE

Great story!

5 for all four chapters.

This is hard to write, but please be careful to not fall in the trap of writing the same story with different names. I love your stories, but they seem to almost be the same thing. Perhaps if they were different age groups or in modern times or with different pet names or even backgrounds that would be nice.

You're a good writer just remember to mix it up a little at times.

When did reputable motels stop checking the marital status of couples sharing rooms? I know it was still an issue in the early 1970's.Five stars in any case.

BRILLIANT

A tale for its time looking forward to pt 05.

I think hotels and motels stopped checking, in most places, by the late 60s. Laws were changing everywhere to get the government out of people's sex lives. In some areas. they may have cared if the owners were deeply religious, but overall, it's been a long time now. Besides, I'm writing in my own fictional universe. I make the rules! It's like being your own god!

while i think this is a very nice romantic story i do think they are sickeningly too lovey dovey and theres too many sex scenes to the point where they are all starting to sound and feel the same. in each one they tell each other they love one another 500 times