All Comments on 'Eva Pt. 05'

Don't worry about fixing what isn't broken! Been with you since you stared posting on this site just be Rabbitman.

Cheers

SAGE

I have enjoyed this story and am waiting for the next one already!!! Please keep 'em coming!!!

5 stars all the way. Loved it.

If you can, I would enjoy following Jon and Eva through college and on the married life and a family. Fingers crossed 🤞.

There's a pretty good, nostalgic story for me, somewhere between the 75% sexcapades passages. Could have been 5* for every chapter for me if not for all the sex details. Also, I can't see how the hell the Dad could get away with having sex in the living room for 6 months or more. Women, particularly wives, would be highly cognizant of the slightest throw pillow inches out of place!

the amount of times they call each other bear and angel is sickening. makes it so hard to read when every line is some form of i love you bear or my gentle bear or my loving angel or whatever.

Re: Lions86 OK, don't read it anymore. Plenty of people are enjoying it. It's under Romance, after all.