All Comments on 'Eva Pt. 17'

So good. So very very good.

THANKS

Great new episode of a wonderful on going story. Going to hate seeing this one end. Well, I always hate when your stories end!

One nit that I know more than I will mention the Navy O-2 Rank is not Second Lieutenant! That is Army and Marine speak. The Navy Rank is Lieutenant Junior Grade or simply "JG". One single silver bar. No biggie didn't detract from the story at all!

Cheers

SAGE

ATN-2 (USN 1965 to 1969)

Aviation Electronics Technician (Communications/Navigation) Second Class

Full disclosure: Two deployments to Vietnam

Thanks for the correction, Sage. I should have known that, actually; I like military fiction and non-fiction. Dopey mistake. Where you been? Haven't heard from one of my biggest fans in a while! Hope all is well! Rabbitman

Great chapter!

5

So far, this is the best story I've seen on Literotica! Please keep on writing and thank you!

Loving this series , it feels so right, I know this is a work of fiction but I feel a good writer will always find ways to include real life experiences to give the story that ring of truth. This is what appeals to me. As always Five stars.