All Comments on 'Eva St. Eden Ch. 01'

Congratulations on FINALLY getting one of your femme fatales to actually have some type of sex. I admit that I was expecting a hand job for the intro . . .

Now, how to proceed?

I know that I will not be alone waiting for your next installment. Big question is . . . Will it be yet another character OR will someone we have already met move along sexually?

Oh yes. There are words missing and Proof Reading is a REQUIREMENT.