All Comments on 'Eva's Creation Ch. 01'

Thank you to anyone who read my story! I really hope you enjoyed a futuristic take on chastity/orgasm denial! If you are interested in reading more or supporting what I do, I have up to chapter 3 finished on my patreon, as well as other stories/artworks! (Link on my profile). If not, no worries! I try to post a chapter publicly for every 2 I get on patreon, so it'll be released for free eventually!

It's a marvelous story.

really nice start.

Do I understand correctly that the time gap between the appearance of the story here and on Reddit is the time it took for the editors to check and approve the story?

Genuinly an amazing start. I look forward to the other installments!

A very good start. I look forward to reading more. Thank you.

Great first chapter!

Love this. I'd love to see more. What a great idea. And a really impressive writing style too.

Great work!

I love your previous stories, but this was just a lot of techical descriptions, but no soul.

Well, I guess that's what this "cyberpunk" theme is about.

No emotions, just meat, metal and plastic.