All Comments on 'Eva's Unexpected Encounter Ch. 01'

went from 4 stars to 2 when the writing degenerated into a collection of cliches - eleven prick - yeah, you right boss

Pregnancy risk sex is the only real sex there is - all other sex is mere mutual masturbation. It can be damn hot, especially when a baby is not wanted - sort of like extreme sports where there is a penalty for losing - a real adrenaline rush! A rush that can last for a full two weeks.

On the continuation I hope you put in a lot more about risk taking and how it feels when a woman gets filled and knows what might happen. Let's hear some conversation about it.

Does she take the morning after pill?

This is screaming for another chapter. Great start.

Good story line, good descriptive writing, just keep it realistic, he didn't have to be 11",