All Comments on 'Eve'

Keep writing 🙂

Such fun!

Such fun!

Hello Lauren, I have been reading your latest story, Steve/Eve's tale and I am really enjoying it. In fact, I have been a fan of your work for a long time and I have always liked your stories. It is wonderful to see you posting new material so I hope you keep adding to this story and hopefully post more.

I am curious, though if you have given and thought to adding to one of your older stories, "He to She"? That is one of my favorite works from you and one of the best I have seen on Literotica. I would love to see some more of what could happen between Chopper and Billie.

Anyway, thank you so much for sharing your stories.

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