All Comments on 'Eve and Emily'

Nice story..

You have to be direct, intimidating sometimes. I think women like confident women.

But then Eve was no ordinary woman.

J x

@Yesok1 - thanks, hun 😊 Emily

Now that's an evening I'd like to hear more of.

@Rob_Royale - maybe it needs a 750 word sequel 😊 Emily

Nicely done. I like the sensitivity with which you handled a delicate subject. 5*~~JB

@JBEdwards - thank you , not so bad for a first time in this category 😊 Emily

Acceptance is what we all want isn't it? A transgender person finding themselves, an older guy thinking they don't belong with that young thing, a petite girl feeling insecure about her endowment... Often in your stories I feel that the main thing that's happening is the main character bringing out a transformation or a flowering or an opening up in another, by showing acceptance they hadn't found before.

@djrip - very perceptive of you 😊 Emily

I did not note the catagory when I started reading. Made the reveal all the more sweet. Very nice job, as always.

Great perception ... Really good writing.

... Not, at least for me, a Rock Cock kind of story. But, sometimes that isn't the point.

... I have a 'trans' grandchild -- M >> F -- who now has a significant other -- and have wondered how the sex works, but have never delved into the actual activity thereof. ...

... Your work is always good ( otherwise I wouldn't have picked up on this story ) ... Keep them coming !

Take Care, Stay Safe Levi

@Cracker270 - oh that’s sweet that it was a surprise 🌹🌹🌹 Emily

@Tail_Gunner - thank you for your ongoing kindness 🌹🌹🌹 Emily

Enjoy your so often playful/mischievous style, and this piece so honest and genuine. Thanks for continuing to share your fertile imagination.

@Migbird - thank you - it was meant to be honest, one reason I put myself in the story as opposed to some random woman. Emily

Very nice. As a transgender woman myself, I never know how to approach another. Most of do our best to blend in and not be clocked. I know that I have my limitations and thus I am not insulted when someone calls me sir. You handled the situation nicely and with respect. It may have also helped that she knew the other from before. I like your style and hope you write more in this genre

@Caseyjo - Hi. I was very concerned to be respectful and spoke to two female trans friends about the story. I’m glad that what I did was OK for you. Always difficult to write outside your own direct experience, but I tried my best to be empathetic. People are people, right? Love is love. Emily

Loved it, 😍 and as per usual with these 750 word yarns, and your writing in general really, left me wanting more.

@steelyblue73 - scope for several of them to become longer stories. Emily

Smoking hot 750 word story! With lots of room in it to stretch it into a novel, at least!

@AmberSolis - thank you. It does have scope, I agree 😊 Emily

Great "Quickie!" - In every sense of the term. Witty, fast but not too fast, empathetic and hot! xoxo, Di

@DianeRedfern - thank you so much for saying 😊 Emily

I as well failed to notice the catagory, not something that I would normally read, but then there is your superb writing talent. Very good story, as usual.

Much thanks.

Ha! Loved the twist

@Dr2Stricr - no intent at ambushing. Thank you for the kind words 😊 Em

@lc68hunter - thank you 😊 Em

A lovely intro, I hope you'll consider another chapter. So full of promise.

@lerenarduse - thank you - maybe I should pick up the story again 😊 Emily