Eve & Lucy Ch. 05: Show Time

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"Actually, I think Suzy would jump into bed with both of them, preferably together, given half a chance. But Amanda very clearly only has eyes for Carrie. Carrie just needs to trust her. This will be good for her I think."

"Well, great! Your girl, going to be a famous actress!"

"Yeah. Maybe. I mean, it might be a flop and she might be back here on her course next year. Or maybe she'll be lucky and it'll be a huge hit and she'll be acting forever. Who knows? But she's taken the hardest step. So now I think she'll be fine."

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Fin. All comments and feedback gratefully received.

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NellymcboatfaceNellymcboatface20 days ago

FABULOUS, what a wonderful tale of twists, highs and lows... To end with a tumultuous big bang!

You nearly had me signing up for Netflix too !

Thanks for sharing x

Nightwish1977Nightwish197728 days ago

Such a lovely story. Also, it's nice to hear Ray, Sarah and Lizzie made it to Amazon TV :).

Bluesea00Bluesea00about 1 month ago

Nice Drama, refreshing since it thread out of the topics of a love story without deniying us the happy end . (I was worried a t the beguining till I guessed Lucy didn't stand from the toxic relationship Amanda has....but for Lucifer ).

I also appreciate how carefully you interwine the lives of the other characters carefully growing them into real persons. Good Story.

LiberalMindsLiberalMindsabout 1 month ago

Wow! I mean, WOW! What a story! THBGato! Please, I want to stay in the Carrie/Amanda universe. Pleas let their success unfold here on Ligerotica. Your plots and characters are brilliant.

stevep132stevep132about 2 months ago

Really really good. You’re up there with the best of the authors on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

You're my new favorite author on this site. I can't wait to see what you're doing next. Enjoy your break.

Nicole2023Nicole2023about 2 months ago

Your stories just keep get better

NoLongerAnonNoLongerAnonabout 2 months ago

I'm glad my worst fears about Lucy proved unfounded. In fact once her anger subsided she behaved exceptionally decently.

I found this whole chapter heartwarming. Amanda and Carrie's lovemaking was tender and loving, and vanilla. Like Amanda, I like vanilla. Their acting success was wonderful, if barely plausible. Even the reaction of Amanda's parents didn't put a damper on things.

The inclusion of Sarah, Ray and Lizzie' story was a lovely surprise. Each and Every Corner is one of my all-time favourite stories. If anyone is unfamiliar with these stories, then I'm going to recommend that they read all the stories to fully appreciate the characters and setting.

Goodness, you deserve a break! In just two months you've given us a substantial body of work of the highest quality. Please come back when you feel refreshed and inspired.

WrexscarWrexscarabout 2 months ago

I absolutely loved this. This wasn't porn or even erotica but a well written romance with a full cast of well rounded supporting characters.

I cried while reading the section with Amanda and her parents and her roommates response.

At 87k words it is absolutely the right length to be published. There are niche publishers of lesbian romance who would snap your hand off for this. (My bestie just had her first novel published.) I'm absolutely serious about that.

I loved this 5 stars on every chapter.

toesucker1toesucker1about 2 months ago

OMG I went through 10 tissues on this one. So good. "Let's be gentle with one another." I love everything about this series. It's not a simple Jilling story -- the characters and themes are really deep.

galadriel_fangaladriel_fanabout 2 months ago

Oh thank you, I’ve been checking the site repeatedly since you updated your profile, and I was beginning to despair. Silly me.

A great finish to part one of Carrie and Amanda’s story. Very sad about Amanda’s parents, but the sisters are there for her. Samantha is so dear. All the foreshadowing of Carrie’s insecurities and anxiety kept me anxious until the end. Also happy Georgie gets her girl.

I hope your time off rejuvenates you. Hope to see you again in summer/fall. THANK YOU.

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