All Comments on 'Eve Goes to Heaven'

Great!

Love the reference to Peter denying Christ three times before the rooster crows.

WOW, What a great take on this situation. Holy Moly. Showing an innocent wife, determined to chaste, seduced to her dismay. No One is perfect, No One can resist all temptations. We can only do, what we can to be faithful and true. 5 stars to the writer. Great Writing, Great story. Thanks you for a Great Effort! Buster2U

Given the right circumstances, everyone will cheat. Besides, using your heaven analogy, then being good or decent is irrelevant: it’s only by being a Christian do you go to heaven.

So she's guilty because someone fantasises about her cheating? Makes it hard to qualify for Heaven.

Very clever, the last sentence

Yeah, and if someone read this in the same room as you, they would probably have smacked you in the back of the head. I guess that makes them assailants by default? Fucking stupid...

What's the moral to the story? It's like she has the chat with St. Peter, he shows her what could have happened, so what? I feel like I missed the punch line somewhere.

grest start,needs part two

That's it? Sp what happened after?

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Big deal, so Peter showed her an alternate time line, there's no indication that in her reality that she lusted for Damien.

This feels like it ends halfway through.

Very clever story. Lust in her heart IS adultry in the Christian religion (remember Jimmy Carter?). Since she never repented she's hell bound! The alternative is what she imagined in her lust. Nicely done! 5 stars

Yup, it definitely needs a part 2 or epilogue. Since it's the dark path that her life could have taken, I'm guessing it would involve:

- her finding out she was pregnant a month after coming home from the honeymoon and knowing the father was the singer.

- her keeping the baby and getting divorced after she gives birth to another man's baby.

- her living in a low income district and taking up work as a stripper or prostitute to pay the bills and care for her son.

- her getting pregnant multiple times from different black men and not knowing the identity of their fathers.

- her being an exhausted single mother yet very sexually fulfilled and happy with her life.

That's all guesswork though.

I cheated on my honeymoon as well. It was with one of the waiters at the hotel. He was a sexy black man and damn was he built. His body was amazing with his clothes on but it was enough to make me come just looking at him when he took them off. My husband was in our room because like a fool he didn’t listen and put on sunscreen the day before. His sunburn was horrible. I met The waiter at the pool bar. He flirted with me for about an hour and finally convinced me to meet him after his shift. I did and he took me to a small apartment nearby. He fucked me four times and filled me with so much cum. When I got back my husband must have smelled the sex on me and was horny. I managed to suck his cock without hurting him. I fucked the waiter two more times while on my honey moon.

I think the Anonymous commenter just before me, a month ago, should write her own story. Her comments call out for more details on her screwing around on her Honey Moom. LOL imagine being the poor guy that she married! Sunburned so bad he is stuck in the room while his bride is out getting BBC the whole time that they are there! Sounds like so many of my GF's of the past that I had to 'kick to the curb'. The funny thing is I've finally realized that if you want a Great Sex partner, just don't expect them to be 'faithful'. Horny women fuck other men all the time, that is just how they are. If you find a woman that is able to keep her panties on, she probably isn't very good in the sack. Only the Sluts are any good because they fuck all the time and have all the experience. If you want a good lover, get yourself a whore or a slut. Just don't get uptight when she is fucking someone else while you are at work or on a business trip. that is just what they do! LOL The ones that stay faithful don't care about sex that much, and don't care if you are satisfied or not. Just the way it works. LOL Buster2U