All Comments on 'Eveline's Strangest Journey Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wish other coaches were as determined

For a coach the concerns she has for her charges is extraordinary. Looking out for their welfare, while working them hard, is nice to see. Strange, very little was said about Eveline in this chapter except for a couple in instances. I fully expected that the coach would be spanking a few during and after the workout.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Nudist or adult?

Overall good Nudist basketball story----but not "adult";

Fine for "nude basketball camp"----but perhaps needs more adult content?

Male couch? People (clothed) to come watch during practice?

Some sort of sexual rewards or punishments?

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