All Comments on 'Even Scars Are Beautiful Ch. 03'

The wording has become more flowery and less realistic. Also your timeline on things is strange. The ex getting married 4 months after breakup and jade being a 28 year old senior for no discernible reason were 2 things that stood out to me.

Jade's pyscho ex is stalking her.

Remember when i said this was based on personal experiences? When this happened, i was around 28 years old and because i started college late in life and was a double major, thats why i was a senior when this took place . The people i edit for found out about my story and said i should tell it for others and yes he truly was a psycho.....

Jade needs help, she has created this "beast" persona to help her deal with being bullied as a youngster. That Paxton creep needs to be run over by mack struck

!! I am liking this story, I hope that Jade gets the help that she needs.

"It's ok

The wording has become more flowery and less realistic. Also your timeline on things is strange. The ex getting married 4 months after breakup and jade being a 28 year old senior for no discernible reason were 2 things that stood out to me."

I agree with this comment.

Interesting....a few parts needed some fine tuning..and the ex is a nut that needs a 12.7 in his head. Keep at it chica

Oh please hurry and tell us what will happen next! This is very good.

Characters are well rounded

Plot is engaging

Want more please!

Wow........amazing piece!!! When I started reading this, a significant while back...the earlier chapters, I wasn't feeling it. However, I am mightily intrigued and think it is going to take more than one more chapter to complete this. It was very juicy...could have used a tighter tweaking, but all in all, I liked the Jade character.

Looking forward.

This has two more chapters and i just finished one...getting it to my editor then i will post ...rhank you for your support

Very intense chapter!