All Comments on 'Every Girl in Edgarville'

by NotWise

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GrinrainGrinrainabout 2 years ago

A great story, this X version or even a PG version. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

The twist was predictable pretty early, but that's more about me than you. That said, the story was fun to read, almost believable, well told, and, best of all, made me wish I was Abner.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fun and loved the twist. 5*

finegoldwinefinegoldwineabout 2 years ago

Nice Story, brings some memories from another time. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Just a couple of complaints about this five star story.

Her name wasn’t Becky, and my name ain’t Abner. Otherwise, you pretty much got it all right.

Cal59Cal59about 2 years ago

Liked it, thanks for your work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Yeah, I liked it too

brian_scoobybrian_scoobyabout 2 years ago

Noice… very sweet story. A very enjoyable read! Thank-you

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Stories been around a time or too. Over a year! Small towns are great fun. What happened to Meg, your sister, and Sharon?

NotWiseNotWise9 months agoAuthor

@Anonymous, Meg moved to Chicago with her husband and Sharon became a recluse on her family's ranch.

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